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sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

Wonderful as always

Wonderful as always Sir....Amazing how one can take there own life experiences and turn them into a beautiful piece of art..that each person can read interpret to their own meanings.. Out of all the pieces you have created this by far is one of my favorites..
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Bows (gracefully)

Thank you M'Lady...you know more than anyone what this one means for me. And I am thankful each and every day to have you by my side in sharing those life exeriences. I wouldn't wanna miss them for the world. You know this door is open, I believe you got the key ~winks~. Love, Moi
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

The title

is sheer magick! I am entranced with the moon and the title pulled me right into this piece. The language which constructs the poem is sublime and haunting. The pacing is excellent and it flows nicely. I'm afraid I am in love with the darkness of the subject matter. Excellent write! Always, Cat
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Cat (Candlewitch)

Nameste...It is a blessing to hear when ones work is apreciated by another. This one holds a pretty deep meaning for me so I'm glad that you didn't cut it down lol. I hope that you get another chance to read it now that I've added the second half of it. As always I thank you for dropping in here. Be well, Corey (2Quills)
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sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

At your request..I will post

At your request..I will post this here..being it was written to go with it..~smiles~ My soul is poisoned by these wretched chains These that no matter how I try I cannot seem to break They have delivered me up to my fears and doubts And yet somehow they have given me a strength unlike any I have ever known. I shall not live a hundred years There are many things I should but don’t hold dear But no matter how I hide~ my love will always shine through Guiding me through these ~Moonless Nights~ Seeking answers to truths which I do not know Somehow I understand as the ~Wolf Speaks~ there is so much More to this life to ~My~ life than just me.. This is what he shows this is what I now know I take a deep life giving breath Stepping slowly towards the path that I have not uncovered yet My heart and mind will be guided by my spirit by the ~spirit of Wolf~ Even those cold ~Moonless Nights~ that I feel alone he is with me Guiding me showing me that he has never forsake me for ~He~ is ~Me~ Challenges I must embrace Sometimes plentiful and sometime unique Regardless of the choices I choose to make My ~Spirit~ will give me the peace I seek Fate has pushed me in many directions Many possible endings that I cannot see But when this ~Wolf~ feels the ~Moons~ most beautiful light They are as wonderful and magnificent as I deserve them to be.. Humbly bows her head to her ~King~
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Corey

Congratulations on evolution !! I am bewitched with the moon as Cat is and the title caught my eye, Awesome write ... Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

ooppppppssss forgot the

ooppppppssss forgot the stars ..... lol "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

It is when you howl that you

It is when you howl that you are the most beautiful... never stifle the howl that brings the moon to life! ~A I shouldn't forget stars at quarter to three in the morning. Sheesh! "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's