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Life Patterns (the Shit)









                                                         t
                                                  e      i
                                             m         m
                                         o             e
                                     S              s

                               e      i s    a    p i l e    o f
                           f                                                 s
                         i                                                      h
                         L                                                      i
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                     y o u     j u s t     h a v e   t o   r e v e l  
           
             d                                                                             i
          n                                                                                  n
         a                                                                                     i             
                                                                                              t
— faerybeki, Jul 19, 2009

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 10 months ago

lol

Richard Jeni - big steaming pile of me.... that's what this reminded me of. Clever. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Sundown you better take care if I find you've been creepin' 'round my back stairs. Sometimes I think it's a sin when I feel like I'm winnin' when I'm losing again" - Gordon Lightfoot
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

;-)love your concrete poems,

;-) love your concrete poems, even the smelly ones.. ~A "Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood." T. S. Eliot
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Oh I do go about about shit

Oh I do go 'on' about shit often ... and it dribbles out alot... This one was pure brilliance in poo ... LOL love you hope your dancing and whirling with Omi or sleeping probably HUG Love Jayne x x P.S. came back to read your little pile of poo again LOL and realised i wrote " oh i do go about about shit often pmsl wtf was that , me was tired me thinks , corrected it lmfao :)
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 10 months ago

LOL :) I love that you came

LOL :) I love that you came back to 'edit' your comment ;) Glad you enjoyed this one hon, I did have a giggle as I posted it, looked more poo like than I expected! love you too, do hope you're letting yourself rest :) hugs and much love Beki xxx
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Wafi

16 years 10 months ago

Haha Beki

Haha... Beki, the image made it soooooo much funny.... Love your creativity! It must be a tough thing to put it on the page like this. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 10 months ago

Wafi, happy it made you

Wafi, happy it made you laugh, I've been really enjoying these recent 'shape' poems, they 'pop' up all complete and I just have to move the letters about till it looks right, I kind of zone out, quite meditative lol. Always good to see you Wafi, much love Beki xx
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Ink Dragon

16 years 10 months ago

Beki,

I'm laughing even harder!!! Much love, ~Nina
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 10 months ago

:) been making you laugh a

:) been making you laugh a bit recently lol I'm happy so many have enjoyed this one, it makes me smile 'cause they're such fun to do :) much love to you dear Nina xx
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aquarian phoenix

16 years 10 months ago

Nice.

Nice.