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Jul 19, 2009
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Life Patterns (the Shit)
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L i
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y o u j u s t h a v e t o r e v e l
d i
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a i
t
— faerybeki, Jul 19, 2009
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Critiques
infinite_dwarf
17 years ago
lol
faerybeki
17 years ago
Happy it gave you a giggle
Kailashana
17 years ago
;-)love your concrete poems,
faerybeki
17 years ago
…and they love you too ;)
Zephyr
17 years ago
A fun concrete poem, lol.
faerybeki
17 years ago
Happy you enjoyed, I
Seren
17 years ago
Oh I do go about about shit
faerybeki
17 years ago
LOL :) I love that you came
Wafi
17 years ago
Haha Beki
faerybeki
17 years ago
Wafi, happy it made you
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Beki,
faerybeki
17 years ago
:) been making you laugh a
aquarian phoenix
17 years ago
Nice.
faerybeki
17 years ago
Thank you x
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