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surface apart

 Yesterdays 
have come and gone
tomorrows lie soft in waiting

Day to night
our memories part
to lift softly our loves of  late

streams that move
blend thoughts we hold
To the sands that sleep so silent

while  hours pass
in cool the whispers
warmth of inner dreams reliant

Depths to reach
left to ours we search
in this time that is forgiven

while false a maze 
 takes us endless outfar from paths that lead misgiven

So strong our force
held by thoughts so deep
we grasp to not ever part

As guided hopes
that within us dwell 
Lift all to a surface apart













 
— mantiscepter, Jul 19, 2009

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yenti

yenti

16 years 9 months ago

Mantiscepter

A lovely trip into the relms of the inner self and the thought that either haunt us or let us live life to the full it is a knife edge we live on and the inner feelings dictate how we cope. Your Piece is very well put out and neads a staedy mind to read as it falls through the veil of outward appearences, Yours Ian.T