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Jul 19, 2009
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surface apart
Yesterdays
have come and gone
tomorrows lie soft in waiting
Day to night
our memories part
to lift softly our loves of late
streams that move
blend thoughts we hold
To the sands that sleep so silent
while hours pass
in cool the whispers
warmth of inner dreams reliant
Depths to reach
left to ours we search
in this time that is forgiven
while false a maze
takes us endless outfar from paths that lead misgiven
So strong our force
held by thoughts so deep
we grasp to not ever part
As guided hopes
that within us dwell
Lift all to a surface apart
have come and gone
tomorrows lie soft in waiting
Day to night
our memories part
to lift softly our loves of late
streams that move
blend thoughts we hold
To the sands that sleep so silent
while hours pass
in cool the whispers
warmth of inner dreams reliant
Depths to reach
left to ours we search
in this time that is forgiven
while false a maze
takes us endless outfar from paths that lead misgiven
So strong our force
held by thoughts so deep
we grasp to not ever part
As guided hopes
that within us dwell
Lift all to a surface apart
— mantiscepter, Jul 19, 2009
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