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Jul 18, 2009
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DISTANT PLACES
DISTANT PLACES
I live in a distant place
A cold and lonely place
Away from all I knew.
All things are not of our choosing
When you are alone
And
On your own.
A soulless world
We dance in
Twirling in our own space.
There is no connection
Not in this distant place
— Geremia, Jul 18, 2009
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