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Practical Application

Let's say one of us owns a secret
and the other will not tell,

hope it's true
that we've got a clue,
so our integrity doesn't go to hell.
 



Say one of us had a feeling
that the other could not share,

only you or I
could make the other cry,
proving only we two care.




Now and then I get an answer
that can slap me in the face,

being not the one
leaves me so undone,
I hate dwelling in this place.




Now a practical application
overwhelms my weary soul,

I try not to mind
but it seems so unkind,
reality sure takes it's toll.




Pray-tell while in this quandary
I won't lean too hard on you,

if my world seems gray
you don't have to stay,
our "pact" remains true blue.




So let us never linger
on what will never be,

you're still my friend
so let us not pretend,
that the both of us can't see.

— docmaverick, Jul 17, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 10 months ago

Interesting comment....

...as well. You know how the phrase goes, "passed like ships in the night"? Well, sometimes one of the ships does not see the other one. That's what I was trying to write about. When you're the only one that's "privy" to the reality of the situation, it's not only awkward...but it's downright lonely. The only thing good about it is, if you haven't opened your mouth yet, then you're the only one who knows the depth of your lonely awkwardness. Anyhoo...that, I think, is what the poem, "does not tell". Kind of you to comment. Oh, and I like your "flutterbye". "Write On", #{:>{)}@==== sincerely, docmaverick.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Much like each and every one

Much like each and every one of our lives... eh? ....AND....there's a certain loneliness and alone-ness that is constant, no matter how the ship is *sighted*, near or far. ...and I've adored your fingertip gossamer-winged baby... i've seen them done in marzipan... is this an Anne Geddes or marzipan art? ~A "Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood." T. S. Eliot
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Before I even scrolled down

Before I even scrolled down I was going to say its like she doesnt notice you , but you have already hashed that out with Anna .. But I loved what was not said in this, it creates a mystery and draws me in anyway... and no matter how many times I read it I would say the same .. Regards Jayne
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 10 months ago

Thanx Jayne....

...Im ALWAS happy to get a comment from you. You seem to almost always speak from the heart, so yours is a comment worth cherishing. I might regret saying that, if you ever positively HATE one of my pieces !Lol ! Oh, come to think of it...you were probably taught to say nothing at all, right ? sincerely, thanx again, #{:>{)}@==== docmaverick.
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 10 months ago

Love's Labour Lost?

Hi there! I liked the sensitivities and sensibilities this poem evokes. I think we've all been in THIS BOAT at some stage of our lives. Just one technical point. I think the verse "Being the one... That I am lost without a trace" - why don't you look at dropping this last line. You've said all of that by implication and this just seems to be a "hanger one" line that doesn't even rhyme. lol See what you think. Sweet write! Bonita j
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 10 months ago

"...without a trace..."....

...had the task of rhyming with, "...slap in the face,"...but, I changed the line as you can see, but a line IS necessary, there. Thanx for the comment, though...I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. sincrely, #{:>{)}@==== docmaverick.