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Midnight Murder
Midnight Murder
Dim black and white,
as she enters the stage,
murder on mystery lane...
She has no clue,
what will happen in a few.
Her gorgeous dress,
cream silk and perfect,
wont be the same after this day.
Man enters left,
murder in his mind,
she has no clue,
of who, where, or why...
Hiding behind the plant,
golden and green.
he makes his way over,
with a cautious gaze,
on the beauty in cream.
Little white flower,
upon my little vase,
shattering with a crack,
as I fall on my bed,
now covered in a glaring red.
Oh,how I wish,
I could live through this.
The revenge is set and clear.
You wont live long,my dear,
I'll find my way,
to make sure you pay.
A knife in her back,
he runs out the right,
into the night,
leaving no tracks,
to be seen in midnights sight.
Curtains close,
black and white murder came today.
But you still dont know whats to come.
Of the murder on mystery lane.
Critiques
ANC1996
16 years 10 months ago
((Grr))
bella1
16 years 10 months ago
OMG
ANC1996
16 years 10 months ago
Okie Dokie!
weirdelf
16 years 10 months ago
This is deceptively clever and deep
ANC1996
16 years 10 months ago
Tanks :]
weirdelf
16 years 10 months ago
Excellent revisions!
bella1
16 years 10 months ago
P.S
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
=0
ANC1996
16 years 10 months ago
Thanks,
AlexaGrace
16 years 10 months ago
Hey,,
ANC1996
16 years 10 months ago
Haha,