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Rainbow droplets

It is Sunday morning, and I have again the task of gathering the good

of those fruits and herbs we planted in our little patch,

where we thought the mystery was beyond the possibilities.

I felt these funny little colors, these gems of pomp and circumstance,

filled with the tearful droplets of the rainbow, might have the value
 
with which we shall have to face our precious, sunny endeavors.

I thought the circle of life will glory with our frail presence here, 

at times bereft of the possible hopes of virtue. We heretofore, 

knowers of the unconcious weeds, and of the savvy wheels
 
of love in progress, may yet want to try some more, before it's too late.

 

 

 

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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

I think this ...

could benefit from a bit of editing, a bit of microtweaking here and there. I esp. like the It is Sunday, and I have again the task of gathering the good of those herbs and fruits that we planted in our little patch for its opening gentleness. Makes a nice entree into the rest of it. A kind of foyer opening just beyond the front door. Thanx, Chuck