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EUREKA

                                       A serenade of delight when
                                       woeful want  turns bright , 
                                       leans away from the murky 
                                       gray  to the brightest side 
                                       of a forgotten day .
                                      
       
                                       With rapturous glee i let this
                                       be .That sudden realization 
                                       that hits you like a tonne 
                                       when achieved that what you
                                       began  
                                       A melody of promise held aloft
                                       divine .
                                       
                                       Belonging , a split second thought 
                                       shot  from the minds eye speaks 
                                       for it`s self .

                                       Intense as it is momentarily leading 
                                       from the depths of brilliance spiraling
                                       outwards to create a sense of awe .
                                       
                                      
— ziggy, Jul 17, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

This is really Beautiful

This is really Beautiful ... A serenade of delight when woeful want turns bright , lovely I cant find fault with it ,its a little gem ... regards Jayne
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ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

hi

hi thanks for your kind comments , jayne im new here still finding my feet here this is the best poetry site i ever found chat soon , enda patrick collins
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

I second

the motion of Jayne's... really a beautiful thought. The theme is most appealing. Always, Cat
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ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

hi cat

hi there its me again thanks cheers for reading my words wrote that many years ago about to post another
doorman

doorman

16 years 9 months ago

Good stuff!

An excellent write, ziggy. Keep on writing. Espen.
doorman

doorman

16 years 9 months ago

Good stuff!

An excellent write, ziggy. Keep on writing. Espen.
doorman

doorman

16 years 9 months ago

Good stuff!

An excellent write, ziggy. Keep on writing. Espen.
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

lol

enda, patrick collins. LOL CHEERS nice one man im glad you read this one i like it my self , i think you have a stonking good poem there mate i really enjoyed it cheers for the stary eyes
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Yo Ziggy

This is very good, I was not on here when this one was born. I like. Lots of love Lyz. XX
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ziggy

16 years 8 months ago

hi

enda, patrick collins. hi lyz , this is own of my own fav`s so cheers so glad you got to read it
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Reread

Still a write to be proud of. And yes, Eureka, theres gold to be found in this here poem. Love to the family From mine. XX
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ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi lyz

i thought i had got away with changing this without been noticed DAM ,lol cheers hope all is well in oz , ps an austrailian won the snooker lol ,my man lost ,,,,,ziggy
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lyz

16 years ago

OH NO, AN AUSSIE WON, bugger, lol.

Never change dearest Enda, never change. Your poem is wonderful, and you take good care of yourself and family. Will be in touch at a later date. XX