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Jul 17, 2009
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EUREKA
A serenade of delight when
woeful want turns bright ,
leans away from the murky
gray to the brightest side
of a forgotten day .
With rapturous glee i let this
be .That sudden realization
that hits you like a tonne
when achieved that what you
began
A melody of promise held aloft
divine .
Belonging , a split second thought
shot from the minds eye speaks
for it`s self .
Intense as it is momentarily leading
from the depths of brilliance spiraling
outwards to create a sense of awe .
woeful want turns bright ,
leans away from the murky
gray to the brightest side
of a forgotten day .
With rapturous glee i let this
be .That sudden realization
that hits you like a tonne
when achieved that what you
began
A melody of promise held aloft
divine .
Belonging , a split second thought
shot from the minds eye speaks
for it`s self .
Intense as it is momentarily leading
from the depths of brilliance spiraling
outwards to create a sense of awe .
— ziggy, Jul 17, 2009
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Seren
17 years ago
This is really Beautiful
ziggy
17 years ago
hi
Candlewitch
17 years ago
I second
ziggy
17 years ago
hi cat
doorman
16 years 10 months ago
Good stuff!
doorman
16 years 10 months ago
Good stuff!
doorman
16 years 10 months ago
Good stuff!
ziggy
16 years 10 months ago
lol
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Yo Ziggy
ziggy
16 years 9 months ago
hi
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Reread
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
hi lyz
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
OH NO, AN AUSSIE WON, bugger, lol.
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