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Jul 17, 2009
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EUREKA
A serenade of delight when
woeful want turns bright ,
leans away from the murky
gray to the brightest side
of a forgotten day .
With rapturous glee i let this
be .That sudden realization
that hits you like a tonne
when achieved that what you
began
A melody of promise held aloft
divine .
Belonging , a split second thought
shot from the minds eye speaks
for it`s self .
Intense as it is momentarily leading
from the depths of brilliance spiraling
outwards to create a sense of awe .
woeful want turns bright ,
leans away from the murky
gray to the brightest side
of a forgotten day .
With rapturous glee i let this
be .That sudden realization
that hits you like a tonne
when achieved that what you
began
A melody of promise held aloft
divine .
Belonging , a split second thought
shot from the minds eye speaks
for it`s self .
Intense as it is momentarily leading
from the depths of brilliance spiraling
outwards to create a sense of awe .
— ziggy, Jul 17, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
This is really Beautiful
ziggy
16 years 10 months ago
hi
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
I second
ziggy
16 years 10 months ago
hi cat
doorman
16 years 9 months ago
Good stuff!
doorman
16 years 9 months ago
Good stuff!
doorman
16 years 9 months ago
Good stuff!
ziggy
16 years 9 months ago
lol
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Yo Ziggy
ziggy
16 years 8 months ago
hi
lyz
16 years 1 month ago
Reread
ziggy
16 years 1 month ago
hi lyz
lyz
16 years ago
OH NO, AN AUSSIE WON, bugger, lol.