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Jul 16, 2009
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A Gifted Red Breath ...
In flaming red clouds
a dragon arrived
coming to stop
mid flight he glides
Mists of crimson
drift to flame-out
vision is clearing
A gift stepped out
Hide of blue Armour
rippled in light
myriads of gashes
scars from fights
Mouth hanging open
he nodded and said
"Milady I've come
lift up your head"
Glittering tears
start down to slide
my miracle had come
heart and soul collide
All of my life
dreams in the night
filled with wonders
of dragons in flight
Kaleidoscoped joy
explodes like a star
dripping eyes mirror
emitting pulsars
Warmth in winter
you did bring
heating my face
a heart starts to sing
Kneeling before your
majestic form
reverence flowing
in midst a windstorm
Wing-tips stretching
proudly he roared
launching to night
eternally he soars
— Seren, Jul 16, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
I like how
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
Anne McCaffery
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
I am and thank you Cat
Geezer
16 years 10 months ago
Following the lead......
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
I am sorry Gee