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Death the Seducer


    I walk in the blanket of the black of night
    All is peaceful, i feel no fright
    The stars shine down,
    Like beacons of hope      
    The man on the moon
    With him i elope

     Because he is the leader
     Of all that is dark                                        
     With him a grand adventure,
     I'm back to embark
                
     A love affair like no other,
      He and i share 
      But this is a party
      Join if you dare 
      
      He often whispers
      In my ear
      Dance with me love,
      For the end is near

      His seduction is instant
      He will own your soul
      Total submission to him,
      That is his goal    
   
       He is ugly and dangerous
      And evil tarnishes  his name
      But i love him completely,
      I feel no shame

      He is the angel of death
      The king of eternal bliss
      You will be hooked from his touch
      And trapped by his kiss

       So take my hand 
       And let me lead  you away
       Say yes to the darkness
       Turn your back on the day

        You can try to resist us
        But it really wont work
       When you get a taste of his wonder
       You will go berserk  

         So don't try to fight us
         You just might as well
        Give in to temptation,
         And join us in hell             
            
             
           
            

            
                                                           
                          
    
                    
                  
                      
— greeneyes, Jul 15, 2009

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Hello

An interesting concept and I do enjoy a good poem from the dark side. Just a couple of minor suggestions. In this line: And evil tarnishes his name the word (and) could be dropped because the rest of the sentence stands on its own. The word (hell) should be capitalized (Hell) as it is a noun. (The name of a place.) Always, Cat
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 10 months ago

Ohhh...this is magnificent!

I am so in love with this poem! I will read it many, many times... It sparkles with enchantment... Exquisite. Raven
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

THANKS

THAT REALLY MEANS ALOT TO ME COMING FROM MY FAVORITE POET. YOUR POEMS NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME.
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 10 months ago

nice

one thing that's attractive to me is death as a seducer love ur ideas -diatom shells