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Jul 15, 2009
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Serpent
Silver serpent sits serenely
waiting for his prey
Thrusting tongue to taste the air
should something pass his way
Spots his quarry in the distance
Slithers from the branch
Hypnotises victim with
His mesmerising dance
Hapless creature captured, trapped
Spellbound in a daze
Paralysed completely
By the silver serpents gaze
© John W Fenn 28-05-2009
— shazbat, Jul 15, 2009
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yenti
16 years 10 months ago
John
shazbat
16 years 10 months ago
Thanks Ian hope you enjoyed