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Jul 15, 2009
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deep sleep
Dispel your disbelief's, cling to
possibility's like corrals on a
reef, with child like imagination
re-awoken a different part of you
has spoken.
Through the fountain of youth
have looked so far beyond the
truth.
For I have dreams that have not
spoken but when I sleep they
have awoken.
A dreamers tale that lay in wait
woken from it`s sleep state,
unyielding to reality our subconscious
mortality.
possibility's like corrals on a
reef, with child like imagination
re-awoken a different part of you
has spoken.
Through the fountain of youth
have looked so far beyond the
truth.
For I have dreams that have not
spoken but when I sleep they
have awoken.
A dreamers tale that lay in wait
woken from it`s sleep state,
unyielding to reality our subconscious
mortality.
— ziggy, Jul 15, 2009
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Bonitaj
17 years ago
trust the Irish
ziggy
17 years ago
hi
Candlewitch
17 years ago
(I like it too!) she whispered
ziggy
17 years ago
hi
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Ziggy
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