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seabhac
seabhac
Jul 14, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Kelpie

"Kelpie"You whispered!Was it because yourode on my backI beguiled you?Drowned you in desire.Was it the blond maneand plaited tailthat tempted you?Or the slow gaitthat matched your stridewhich lured you?Dangerous times,Uncertainties...In a water mares lifeCan there be Love?Not you captivatedBut IBroken but never tamedMad but not insane.
— seabhac, Jul 14, 2009

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Seren

Seren

17 years ago

I love water kelpies, and

I love water kelpies, and actually knew what you were talking about right from the get go and I think this poem is beautiful ... cant find fault with it ... and your last words are brilliant ... Loved them But I Broken but never tamed Mad but not insane. I just wish I had writen them I seriously love those last lines ... Regards Jayne x x
seabhac

seabhac

17 years ago

kelpie

Thanks Jayne great words of encouragement, just what I needed. Liz

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