My Heart Pumps Her Name

"softly I dream her", goosebump line! Give Edge a slap on the back, this is great. I also love the concept of those senryus, each of them can stand well on its own, I believe. Yours, ~Nina

You are such a beautiful writer I think I am not only your friend but your biggest Fan LOL ... I have so much respect for people that can do haiku and senryu I havent done one yet I think it may be a new project to start writing something different you often inspire me and this is awesome my friend loved it immensely ... you write so beautifully and I have not much knowledge so I vote with my eyes and how your poem affected me which was greatly goosebump line ? I got hairs standing on my hairs when I read that and that was before I saw Nina's comment (hug) beautiful my friend you always bewitch me ... Much Love Jayne x x

Now.... that is the way I want my lover to express herself of me. How unfortunate in this circumstance it is for that of a four legged creature. This poem is so much better that you did not extend it. Perfect number of lines and the structure of it is dreamy. I suppose one can just as well refer to the character of this poem as a young child. Works for me..despite my severe allergy to kitties. PINT :)

I would just class them as Asian poetry. These are spare but not sparse and in the tradition of Asian poetry they pack maximum impact in the 17 syllables. The meaning is clear and concise and, I feel, communicated with the soft, almost poignant, passion intended. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)

But I agree wholeheartedly with Jonathan. On a side note, just let me say, simply stunning. Respectfully, Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a liberal, you have no heart. At thirty, if you are not a conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill

Loved the title , it pulled me in to choose to view this above the other first but I really like the imagery it formed for me and because of this I would like to take the time to read your other work. Liz

im liking this one love the title , this works for me , moggys rule

appreciate your knowledge and venturing out into other forms of poetry. Not yet familiar with this form of writing but, will check it out soon. To restrain your thoughts and express them in a certain format without loosing your message takes skill. I commend you on your success in doing so. Take care!

Cat, I fell in love with the last one!! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

I like this poem, and I feel this is a great one. Being a fan of meditation, I like the purpose too, and the way you find a relaxing meaning in your surprising words. I know how much work that entails, that's why I give it five stars to your sensible poem. Saludos. Hugo.

nice. I did look up passion flower. It's usual spelling seems to be one word: passionflower. I esp. like the softness, the gentleness, of these. And "heart pumps her name" is esp. poignant. Thanx, Chuck