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Jul 14, 2009
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Weeping hope Springs
Waves of energy flow off your wings
seep into them, weeping hope springs
you cradle my head, smooth back my hair
bring me to peace, show me you care
Revealed in an atom of radiating joy
bathing in bliss, pain cannot enjoy
evermore near, nor evermore far
I wander this planet, awed and scarred
My Angel of mercy, rapture pure heart
brought us in closer, never to part
silky soft kisses that light up the dawn
make a heart joyful, never you mourn
Wiping off woe like a dirty child
simply get lost in your sweet smile
laughing with joys echoed in night
I’m feeling peace from your indigo light
Energized might pours into me
sets a soul flying, gracefully recedes
soaked into nothing, blazed in love
your wings did carry grace from above
— Seren, Jul 14, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
You already know
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Cat
Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Jayne,
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Nina
greeneyes
16 years 10 months ago
wow this poem is
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Thanks glad you enjoyed it Green Eyes
greeneyes
16 years 10 months ago
just my opinion
Geezer
16 years 10 months ago
This is a site .....
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
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Ink Dragon
16 years 10 months ago
Geezer said it for me, Green Eyes,
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Nina
Ink Dragon
16 years 10 months ago
Jayne, honey,
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Hugz
Paul Butters.
16 years 10 months ago
I think what you (Geezer) advocate is summed up by two words:
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Sorry not sure what you meen
Paul Butters.
16 years 10 months ago
Every time I read this I see more. It is
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Paul
Paul Butters.
16 years 10 months ago
Who can compete with "music?" I have
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Paul