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Jul 13, 2009
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Doodah
Hello, I need a doodah, an idgy widgy thing
They come in orange, red or black
Tied up in yellow string
I don’t know if you sell them
I only hope you do
The other shops don’t have them
They haven’t got a clue
One place, they had some whatsits
But they’re not quite the same
I’m terribly forgetful
I just can’t recall their name
If you have something similar
Then that might do instead
The colour does not matter
As long as it’s not red
Ok, it’s not a problem
If you haven’t got them in
But do you sell those thingys
They’re sort of long and thin.
© John W Fenn 10-07-2009
— shazbat, Jul 13, 2009
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Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
=0
shazbat
16 years 10 months ago
Thanks Cat, someone said to
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
This is most excellent,
shazbat
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you Fleur, I wrote
shazbat
16 years 10 months ago
I hadnt realised he had