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ziggy
Jul 13, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

shades of interest (part two)

 A continuance of the same no one 
 else to blame, Directed by what we 
 fear protecting what we may secretly 
hold dear . Sometimes throwing 
 caution to the wind in times of plenty.

Coming to the conclusion the worst is 
 just an illusion , frustration grips tight 
 having more than want still empty ,
 every-things dissolving nothing stays the 
 same eventually evolving a continuance 
                   of the same  .     


— ziggy, Jul 13, 2009

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yenti

yenti

16 years 10 months ago

Ziggy

Roundabouts and swings are much the same that they both go round, the difference is in the style, your piece took a circle and carried on going around, very much an Einstien Problem of always returning to the same place no matter how far you go, something to do with the relatives, lol One thing that bothered me was that I looked for part one, maybe that was the paradox that they are both there at the same time. Not sure what to say about the puzzle though, but I think you will enlighten me, Yours Ian.T
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

shades of interest part 1

enda, patrick collins. hi cheers for comments you might of noticed in part two the first and last lines are the same is basicly saying some times somes ones life seems like its going around in circles , part two is there to be read also part one needs to be read first , no point in reading the end before the start lol, thanks for reading sorry for delay in responce , ziggy,,,,,,,,,,
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

hello

I can see how part one needs to be read first for continuity. I've experienced this thing of going in circles, myself then I chose to break out of the cycle by changing a few of my habits and took on something new in my life (school) and I found new friends and a new life. Thank you for suggesting I read these. Always, cat
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

shades of interest part two

enda, patrick collins. hi , i had a feeling you might read both , i am so so happy it makes sence to you that means alot , i am all smiles now this one is sort of all about going around in circles maybe it needs a sub title or some thing to suggest this , the first and last lines been the same may hint at this thanks again yours edd