Lost Highway

Maggie this is another lovely journey in words from you I really loved these lines ... Upon the razored edge of time searching endlessly to find Another beautiful write my dear friend and I have one suggestion? In the 3rd line second stanza instead of [and] try [to] in front of pierce ? just feels it has more meening, and its only a suggestion mind you lol (hug) ... much Love Jayne x x

Clear your cookies Maggie I sometimes find if I do that it will edit better for me but make sure you preview changed before you submit then you will see if its going to save your changes and make sure when you finished editing on the page the curser has to be after the last word dont ask me why I just noticed when i had trouble that fixed the problems LOL take care Night Love Jayne x

Such a lovely journey you take me on with your carefully selected words. My favorite lines are: I look with deep sobriety with eyes that look blindingly and pierce my soul unthinkingly with thoughts that are reminding me of life and death relentlessly Always, Cat

A greater compliment cannot be made to me as a poet, than to have inspired a poem. Thank you. I imagine you are using internet exploder so on that I cannot give advice on how to clear the cookies. I find that on the whole, Internet Explorer is just more trouble than it is worth so I haven't really used it except superficially for years. Firefox (which is free) is a much easier, more efficient and less vulnerable program, not to mention faster. I enjoyed the write even though I agree with Jayne's assessment, but realize you are having trouble editing it. Respectfully, Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a liberal, you have no heart. At thirty, if you are not a conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill