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My Dreams to realise

I dream to go beyond the sky and
also to go beyond my life
I want to count the stars of the sky and
also to count number of hits of waves on the shore
The vision of my soul and
the vision of God
The feelings of death and
the memories of past Birth
Everything, everything
I want to know to realize
 the secrets of my  life
My past  forty five may go but
my present seconds will do
To find and realize all the secrets of my life
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 12, 2009

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yenti

yenti

16 years 10 months ago

Sakkthee

On completion of all your tasks on this plain, you will then be able to do as you can now only dream of, you will not need to go count the stars as you will know how many there are but you will be free to love the feelings of love that the universe has in its energy for all time. You will be to busy with so many things that your spirit will need to be quietened in the awe of such beauty. There is no hurry to go there either as the universal energy that is of you and us all is there for always, Yours Ian.T