Kissing Of Minds

It took me to the unnatural elements, really enjoyed the ride. all the best

I love this one I had read a recent one of yours and decided to see what else you had writen ... I adored this one ... Sad and poignant but still beautiful ... regards Jayne x x .... And I quickly broke it up into stanzaz for you I feel it does have better flow and gives each stanza more of a statement ... just ideas and suggestions for this beautiful work There once was a meeting I remember it well the kissing of minds as a guided star fell Nearing to Earth I gazed at it’s sight as if sent from the Heavens with all his might Following the path it led to the hills I walked through the evening by the tattered old mills then coming to chance the place where it nest as an aurora of rainbows quietly showed peaceful quest close by the edges a shadowed did peer silhouetted with colors coming close all to near a feeling of awe arose in my mind with the touch of a presence softly soothing so kind all feelings at peace I lay still in the grass blending all known emotions subconscious at last then lightened with tremors these eyes opened wide in my room I was huddled at last I had cried