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Life Patterns (the Wave)
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Critiques
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Beki,
faerybeki
17 years ago
Nina, oh dear, it looked ok
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
It's the pic,
Seren
17 years ago
I love this idea Beki !!
faerybeki
17 years ago
….So it looks ok to Jayne
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Ah, Beki,
Rett
17 years ago
Beki
faerybeki
17 years ago
Thanks guys, must admit this
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Beki,
faerybeki
17 years ago
That’s interesting, but I
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Neopoets in wonderland,
faerybeki
17 years ago
Both lol :) I’m baffled
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Beats me!
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