The Friendship Ring has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

It is good to see you posting... this poem, it seems to be a recent steamy subject for you, but it is something that most will end up going through at some time in our lives... I thought that many of the sentences were long and could be shortened and still keep the meanings. The looking through the box of memories is a great image, one I have done myself as I'm sure many have... I say it is a great image but it is a sad one, but great because it allows the reader to experience your image with ease... this poem has potential in my opinion, just needs some cutting down to enhance... Richard

wow i felt that one. i couldnt stop reading and had to read twice or thrice. the only thing that got in my way was some simple spelling mistakes, they stopped my concentration and got me thinking about spelling mistakes instead of your heart break. can i make a word up? very imagatic.