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Sinbadthesailorman
Sinbadthesailorman
Jul 11, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Friendship Ring has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

The Friendship Ring
Has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/the-friendship-ring/

                  by
Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, Jul 11, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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themoonman

themoonman

16 years 11 months ago

Sinbad...

It is good to see you posting... this poem, it seems to be a recent steamy subject for you, but it is something that most will end up going through at some time in our lives... I thought that many of the sentences were long and could be shortened and still keep the meanings. The looking through the box of memories is a great image, one I have done myself as I'm sure many have... I say it is a great image but it is a sad one, but great because it allows the reader to experience your image with ease... this poem has potential in my opinion, just needs some cutting down to enhance... Richard
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 10 months ago

Moon This Is An actual event

The Note was giving to me the same day my girlfreind at the time Had a miscariage so to shorten her words I can not. Thank you always for the read and comment Donnie/Sinbad
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jaimiesays

16 years 10 months ago

wow i felt that one. i

wow i felt that one. i couldnt stop reading and had to read twice or thrice. the only thing that got in my way was some simple spelling mistakes, they stopped my concentration and got me thinking about spelling mistakes instead of your heart break. can i make a word up? very imagatic.