early frost

(that may not be the right word) and one that works really well for me, having tomatoes on the deck. A few thoughts: *The first frost bites - good line break *Like diamonds glistening - I might use "glittering" because it has a harder sound, consistent with frost and biting *Scarce green from too short - I would have broken this differently (Scarce green/from too short a summer) to highlight the imagery *It wont matter how they - I also would have broken this differently (It won't matter/how they died) to emphasize the insignificance of the individual tomato but that may not be what you're going for Even without changes, this is a very good poem with crisp images. Enjoyed!