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Angel Oh Angel

            Angel oh Angel
         hover ye like death

thou art not beauty or comfort 
  seeing life bitter at its best

        stories tell ye of old
beyond past-times thou breathes

        of legends fleeting
        deceptions not told
    for thy tell not  thine truths

        stand ye away Angel
       come forth not   to I true

   take wings carry off thine own
 unto people bring visions no more

leave us trails of aroma's bitter cone
         so know us not to follow

  e'er  your  path to come our way
to keep whole  our-selves to hollow

      depart souls not from ours
         come times when sails
               empty of winds 
        
light to shine no more to us or flowers
truly thou art the wants of searchers
           that  hold not  this life

 



























— mantiscepter, Jul 10, 2009

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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

angel of death

thanx for the review Kelsey, I'm guessing from your comments, you may have liked some of this poem?. hope so. come give me hell again !! Mantiscepter