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Hammer

HAMMER

His steps , are heard
From afar
In his walk
Their’s the essences 
Of conquered hearts


He is dressed
In the finesse
Money can ask !
Black leather
Of kings
With  shoes to match

A warrior
A conquerer
Of hearts .
He leaves
Behind his lovers !
Broken
Dismantled
A battle, over before it starts

Hammer !
Is his name
A tool of wood and iron
Like his heart
Indigent
To shame

His touch
A  antidote
To pain .
His kiss
Is another door
To shame .
To love him
Embodies  his name

When the hammer falls
Is the end of the game
— press, Jul 09, 2009

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yenti

yenti

16 years 10 months ago

Press

Once again today another of your works to read, you have improved so much and are bringging us more of your feelings and the craft in your words is becomming good, just a few little errors but nothing to hard, and the theme is good. Having read it again it maybe that the flow is hard and it makes the reader question the whole poem, anyway have a look and let me know what you see there, Yours Ian.T
yenti

yenti

16 years 10 months ago

Press

Duplicate I am in Error this message will not be visable in 1000 years, Yenti