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Oh Grandmother

 Oh GrandmotherWhat has become of where you lived?Your cottage now split into two separate homes.Modernized-non recognizable to the placeOf refuge I once found it.The orchard gone with only the memoryOf my youth there prolonging its existence.The outdoor toilet we named Rosslare,A long journey as a child within the stone wallsProlific with toadflax and other clinging survivors of plant life,Now all gone, no longer needed.The gap between outdoors and indoors widenedIn our mechanical, modernized age.Connections lost.   My minds eye sees your snowy hair and hears your soft voice,You remain alive within meYour brave spirit and soft soul shaped my life by your presenceAnd even now by the spirit of that presenceGone, Grandmother but not forgotten.
— seabhac, Jul 09, 2009

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yenti

yenti

16 years 10 months ago

Seabhac

A lovely tribute to Grand Mother and a sadness at the changes that have taken place where you knew her on this Earth plain, now she is with you in Spirit and can be with you as you need or as she wishes to be. Did not the children of her day learn from the School in the fields, unlike me that has a modern building to cover the old school over ,her field will always be there with its memories and I bet they are beautiful ones, no matter what was going on. Hold her always and one day you will meet again, where her love will guide you even more, Yours Ian.T
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 10 months ago

Ian you have a beautiful

Ian you have a beautiful soul and a lovely way of looking at life. Thank you for understand and empathising with this poem. Liz