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Jul 09, 2009
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A Rose From Our Garden
A Rose From Our Garden
Like a rose from our garden
And stars behind dark clouds
Her presence will be missed
Her hearty laughter her precious smile
We’ll always remember
Etched forever in our heart
Just as rainfalls on tin rooftops
And sunsets behind rainclouds
The tears we shed fill skin bottles
A wife, a mother, a grandmother,
A sister, an aunt, and a cousin
Her smile is what we’ll frame
One day we’ll see her again
Healthy, giving a helping hand in a better world
Where sickness and death cease to exist
Like a rose from our garden
And stars behind dark clouds
Her presence will be missed
Her hearty laughter her precious smile
We’ll always remember
Etched forever in our heart
Just as rainfalls on tin rooftops
And sunsets behind rainclouds
The tears we shed fill skin bottles
A wife, a mother, a grandmother,
A sister, an aunt, and a cousin
Her smile is what we’ll frame
One day we’ll see her again
Healthy, giving a helping hand in a better world
Where sickness and death cease to exist
— Barbara Writes, Jul 09, 2009
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Janice Pearce
17 years ago
A Rose From Our Garden
Barbara Writes
17 years ago
Janice
Candlewitch
17 years ago
Beautiful
Barbara Writes
17 years ago
Cat
Candlewitch
17 years ago
It must have been a real
Eduardo Cruz
17 years ago
Barbara,
Barbara Writes
17 years ago
Eddie
leonard daranjo
17 years ago
Hi Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years ago
Leonard
pint_a_stoli
17 years ago
barbara
pint_a_stoli
17 years ago
barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years ago
PINT
Neuro11
17 years ago
I’m really sorry for your
Barbara Writes
17 years ago
Sorry for your loss
docmaverick
17 years ago
Barbara....
Barbara Writes
17 years ago
Doc
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Barbara
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