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Ride In Heart's Canoe
Paddling on the calm back-waters
Drawn to the brilliant blue sky
I pick fleecy shapes of fantasy
Wonderment and awe greet mind's eye
At every bend in the stream of life
Deep pools of reflection mirror my soul
This trip is not the first I make
There have been others in the past
Not so successful journeys
Whirlpools have me paddling hard
Raging rapids try to break this craft
Boulders of doubt spring leaks
Low limbs try to drag me out
I bail with both hands
To keep from drowning
I keep patching with the glue
Born of the bonds of
Solid relationship
Drifting slowly to my Love's dock
I find her waiting with Ambrosia
Bread of life cheeses of variety
The meat of companionship
Sustains my confidence
And ambrosia quenches thirst
Clasping hands we stroll
To look at the guiding stars
Lighting the way
There may yet be rough water
But the river holds no fear
Or threat we cannot face ....
We ride in Heart's canoe
Critiques
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
This is beautiful Gee
orgami
16 years 11 months ago
Very descriptive poem of feeling and mood