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Jul 08, 2009
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Electric blue Angel
Dedicated to my dear friend Seren - my response to her poem - Angel of the night Beautiful so whist full so dreamlike the land of my dreams I am the Angel of the night tonight with
electric blue flamed tipped wings do
I fly drifting above the ground as I
gently float by with my slender
out stretched hands my long
fingertips with nails of the
deepest blue they brush
lightly the tops of the
whispering grass.All shades of
blue Like a gentle breeze cause and affect like
waves in the sea. I was there, it was me
but there is no one there to see. my
sad blue soul or the shadows of
my electric blue flamed winged
tips dimmed - go cold as ice
and crystallize
I leave the scent of roses red and blue in
my wake. I do shimmer and shine on
gossamer wing do I take flight ever
onwards through this electric
blue night. Oh my friend a true delightful flightOften I do travel and visit the place
where my blue heart lies to see
the face of my true love with
his ocean blue eyes they
sparkle and shine with
a smile that is so
divine Astral projection this
may be this is my
reality
Electric blue - lonesome blue - so blue
electric blue flamed tipped wings do
I fly drifting above the ground as I
gently float by with my slender
out stretched hands my long
fingertips with nails of the
deepest blue they brush
lightly the tops of the
whispering grass.All shades of
blue Like a gentle breeze cause and affect like
waves in the sea. I was there, it was me
but there is no one there to see. my
sad blue soul or the shadows of
my electric blue flamed winged
tips dimmed - go cold as ice
and crystallize
I leave the scent of roses red and blue in
my wake. I do shimmer and shine on
gossamer wing do I take flight ever
onwards through this electric
blue night. Oh my friend a true delightful flightOften I do travel and visit the place
where my blue heart lies to see
the face of my true love with
his ocean blue eyes they
sparkle and shine with
a smile that is so
divine Astral projection this
may be this is my
reality
Electric blue - lonesome blue - so blue
— Electric Blue, Jul 08, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
Hi Maggie
Electric Blue
16 years 11 months ago
Electric Blue Angel
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Ohhhhhhhhh Maggie (((HUGZ)))
Electric Blue
16 years 11 months ago
Electric Blue Angel