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Electric blue Angel

 Dedicated to my dear friend Seren -  my response to her poem - Angel of the night   Beautiful so whist full so dreamlike the land of my dreams I am the Angel of the night tonight with
electric blue flamed tipped wings do
I fly drifting above the ground as I
gently float by with my slender
out stretched hands my long
fingertips with nails of the
deepest blue they brush
lightly the tops of the
whispering grass.All shades of
blue Like a gentle breeze cause and affect like
waves in the sea. I was there, it was me
but there is no one there to see. my
sad  blue soul or the shadows of 
my electric blue flamed winged
tips dimmed - go cold as ice
and crystallize

I  leave the scent of roses red and blue in
my wake. I do shimmer and shine on
gossamer wing do I take flight ever
onwards through this electric
blue night. Oh my friend a true delightful flightOften I do travel and visit the place
where my blue heart lies to see
the face of my true love  with
his ocean blue eyes they
sparkle and shine with
a smile that is so
divine  Astral projection this
may be this is my
reality


Electric blue - lonesome blue - so blue
— Electric Blue, Jul 08, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Hi Maggie

Your poem sweetly accentuates Jayne's Angel of the Night. Very wistful, but nicely done. Always, Cat
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

Electric Blue Angel

Cat My dear friend and Angel of Green well you and me Angels be. Our dear friend Seren. Sleepless night up at all times great to talk across the oceans deep my lifeline here with those I keep. How are you my dear friend. Sorry I have been away for a while but still dealing with my late husband probate and such etc. So much paperwork phone calls etc. I could not write for a while but now my have started to tumble and free fall again. always my friend Electric Blue from me to you
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Ohhhhhhhhh Maggie (((HUGZ)))

I am nearly crying here this really is beautiful your flowing in blue breezes now and they are lifting you into air thats hard to breath ... loved this Maggie your such a wonderful friend I couldnt ask for better friends than you and Cat you are my angels in the Night its night here now and actually its nearly morning had a bad night but finding this little gem right before bed has left me with a huge smile on my face ((((hugz)))) sleep sweet dreams my friend big love Jayne x x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

Electric Blue Angel

Jayne I am glad to bring happy tears to spring forth. So lay back and take a breath deep relax be serene Let me take you to the land of my electric blue dreams let me take on your pain and release you for a short while I am sorry you had a bad night I know that pain relief does not always work but rest. Be swept into my dreams of the night When we can take flight with my blue angel wings to glow in the dark with tink's fairy dust I sprinkle on us. Where illness does not exist we will be set free like the birds and the bees we will take flight with such ease and view such wonders from afar our spirits be set free and take flight into my electric blue night. Come join me - both of us will be set free just to be Peace be with you my dear friend. I hope I can ease some of your pain. I am here day or night when ever you need me Always Maggie Electric Blue