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Kailashana
Kailashana
Jul 08, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

did u miss it?

12:34:56   7/8/9 ???

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— Kailashana, Jul 08, 2009
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themoonman

themoonman

17 years ago

me too...

and dumbass me even came to this "short story" and wondered where it was the first time... so much going on, and here you are noticing something we've all let slip past us... astounding when it sinks in... the order of things ucounted for thanks Anna Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years ago

….and the world keeps on

....and the world keeps on turning.... lol. just some interesting stuff, no biggy. thanks for commenting Kelsey, Moonman. Love, Anna "It is unwise to be too sure of one's own wisdom. It is healthy to be reminded that the strongest might weaken and the wisest might err." Mahatma Gandhi

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