I am Man

Evocative on many levels, Beki. Thank you. Love, ~Rick

I am late to this party, but I thought I'd add my twopence anyway. This piece is written in a style that my proprietress calls "thoughtflow". I, too, write like this, very often, but have recently found that a little polishing is needed with these poems. Take a peek at my poem "Creation" if you have the time, I think we have a theme in common here. I wrote it as a thoughtflow and have posted this version to the forums, then later tried to rewrite it as a sonnet, which I have posted to the stream. I liked both versions (actually, I liked my thoughtflow even better), but I think most readers would prefer the structured version. Gosh! I'm turning into a verbose b*** ;) I'd better stop commenting now... Sorry, my brain is in overdrive today, ideas surfacing all the time from out of nowhere... Much love, ~Nina

I love this piece.