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Jul 08, 2009
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OLDER HANDS
OLDER HANDS
His fingers
Slightly curled
Testifying !
The tight grip
For happiness
Impossible
To hold
His hands
Wrinkled
Lines of aging
His left hand
Mover than his right
I don’t remember
Were we met
I walked asleep
Thinking unconscionable
Questions ?
Of my rope
Griping my life
In what church ?
Who’s store ?
Was it a street corner
Drinking vodka , at a bar
When he said ?
Please excuse me
I will be out of your way
One , moment please ?
My mind is sharp
But my grip
Is less , than it could be
My thinking , walking at sleep
He is called ?
Politely , a old man
Move out of my way
Another old dad
Pops , profiled
In his reply ?
First
I know you
Second , how is your dad
I was the one who loaned
Your family the money
I cosigned for your life
His fingers
Slightly curled
Testifying !
The tight grip
For happiness
Impossible
To hold
His hands
Wrinkled
Lines of aging
His left hand
Mover than his right
I don’t remember
Were we met
I walked asleep
Thinking unconscionable
Questions ?
Of my rope
Griping my life
In what church ?
Who’s store ?
Was it a street corner
Drinking vodka , at a bar
When he said ?
Please excuse me
I will be out of your way
One , moment please ?
My mind is sharp
But my grip
Is less , than it could be
My thinking , walking at sleep
He is called ?
Politely , a old man
Move out of my way
Another old dad
Pops , profiled
In his reply ?
First
I know you
Second , how is your dad
I was the one who loaned
Your family the money
I cosigned for your life
— press, Jul 08, 2009
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