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Death of Sweet Sun

Death of Sweet Sun

 

The Western sun sets in the death and

made this earth to dwell in dark

His smiling face emits a light

in all dark gloomy weeping hearts

His dance and voice are everywhere as air and

entertain God  in His distress hours

He may be born in western sphere

he mingled with us as musical air

He may take our lovely star

 to adorn His holy world

May His soul rest in peace and

this tribute may reach his feet

See his face in all dancers and

hear his voice in all music notes

Sun Never dies or sets forever and

it will rise again definitely in east



Created and dedicated to THE GREAT POP SINGER MICHEAL JACKSON  for his death as condolence tribute

 

 

 

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 08, 2009

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 11 months ago

Warm and Beautiful...

This poem is very beautiful... It will touch many hearts...and perhaps open some others. Thank you for sharing your words and feelings. Raven
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

I give you an.....

I give you an awesome simply because I have never seen this side of you Sakkkkkk. I am at a loss, trying to critique this poem is very hard. I am just going with my heart and giving you such a high mark for the way it touched me. I'm not sure about the title, but also not sure what else you could call it.~Gee.