All We Know Is What We Know

You never knew
Never knew the pain
The pain that I went through
So how could you come up to me to get
To get the news?
I don't understand it
Making my brain even more
Even more electric
Creating emotions and thoughts
All of which
Make me sick
But
Fuck it
I'll never quit
There's just too much
too much that fits
fits perfectly
Like a fish
in the sea
Possibly
inhancing creativity
But depends on the 'soul' inside your humanity

All we know, is all we know
forever changing, forever unmeaserable

— mdehe, Jul 07, 2009

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themoonman

16 years 10 months ago

Matt...

I think you could improve this one with some spellcheck and maybe a bit less of the repetitions... sometimes they work to enhance a statement, but here you use it too much, seems over done. Content... who never knew? and what pain? could be more consistent. too many caps... distract the read inhancing... enhancing. unmeaserable... unmeasurable. like a fish in the sea... much overused line in poetry, you could come up with something original there. Richard