Hair charm

short and sweet - left me looking for more! How about penning another verse or two? CHeers Boni

Yup, it needs more verses, I agree. Very good what you have so far. Always, Cat

have no fear of your white hair's, but rather be afraid of losing the wisdom that you've gained. Very nice but where the rest of it, I hope you didn't lose it in your hair? thanks Eddie

Well I politely disagree with this needing more, it says what is needed, it's funny and everyone can or will be able to relate... I did think you may need an "a" between such and sorry... although you could add more, I don't think it is needed... smiling at your dilemma... Richard

I laughed at this one Nina after our convo last night in chat about white hairs LOL I loved it tickled my fancy (hugz) Love Jayne x x

coincidence, your (and my) most recent subjects settling on hair. Although the hair at the sides of my head are quite white (pretty much all over those limited areas, in fact), I don't know---really don't---what the color of my hair on top'd be ... if 'twere only there. Ain't hair wonderful? Though I'm about five feet eight and a three-quarter inch tall, I volunteer regularly to others that I'd be about seven-one ... with hair. Always good for a joke. And one that always gets a laugh. (Though sometimes the laugh seems a bit nervous.) Welcome to the Hair Club for Men --- er, I mean People. It's quite well populated. And growing. By the second. Yours, Chuck

The poem is just fine as it is. There is no law stating how long or short it is to validate if it is a legitimate poem. Always, Cat

injects itself into all-too-receptive brain. Mine, that is. "Run for the tweezers or get me some dye!" prompts an alternative: "Run for the tweezers or just let me die!" Chuck

at myself, of course. My tandem thought so expressed was not proffered for serious consideration. Your more subtle version's prob'ly my preferred. (Another (totally irrelevant) thought: Interesting ... that proffered doubles the f ... while preferred prefers the doubled r.) Always good to see you here. Thanx again, Chuck

This is a great poem! made me laugh! i love its short simplicity. no more needs to be said, except for every one white/silver hair you pull out with the tweezers, 20 more will appear! this was great nina, i needed a laugh and you provided it for me. thank you. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink

Like Richard, I think it says it all. Just one thing. I will trade you all my dark hair for your white ones. *snicker* Respectfully, Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a liberal, you have no heart. At thirty, if you are not a conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill

that "Chuckling": I think, unless I'm mistaken, it refers to "a little Chuck," and I'm small enough already. Thank you very much. Yours, Chuck (Chuckles)

Hmmm its the hair thing i to relate to so well. I truly enjoyed this, and feel it is short, sweet and truly to the point, though look forward to it if you do decide to add more of your thoughts to this. This really made me smile upon reading. Thank you! Much love in script. Jill Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)

Succinctly funny.