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Pollen On The Wind

 Floating through life
like pollen on the wind 
seeing hosts of many images
a multitude within
self drawn reflections
pictures of my own
like mirrored walls or hallways
surrounding each alone
way's created to hide among
the dramas of life
like tunes un-sung
without a fullness
to carry on
leaving trails of emptiness
Ive travelled along
I know these feelings 
and I feel for all
but no hope can I give them
for I am part of these halls
Like pollen on the wind 
I have fallen to my ruin
living life's  misconceptions
in mirrored  like illusion

— mantiscepter, Jul 06, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Hello

I like the way you both begin and then sum up with the line: Like pollen on the wind The raw truth of it is, I really liked this depressing poem. The flow is good and the imagery, supurb. Always, Cat
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

pollen

thank you for your comments, they were helpful. sorry the reply was so slow , I"m still learning how to use the site, and this computer. so please comment,any time I will be sure to write you back. thanx. Mantiscepter