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Jul 06, 2009
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My Mark
What is choice?
they say it was given on my start
some are good, some are bad
like peering in the dark,
When I set out upon my future,
I could not count on my heart
but on the things of importance
that weren't just a lark,
When on my own I met the world
it wasn't pretty like in art
but rough and tough,
like scratching naked on some bark
So I worked to take my place,
trying to fill my own life cart
and to my surprise,
I wasn't leaving the slightest mark
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Now I'm old,
looking back upon my start,
I realize that some choices
I did make in the dark,
I look ahead at my children
and pray deep within my heart
that their thinking isn't
that life is just a lark,
today I can appreciate
the beauty that's in art,
my tough exterior is but a farce,
truly, I am not as hard as bark,
I can now count on what I see
the things I've put inside my cart,
my wife, my children, and my life,
I have no riches, but I have left my mark.
they say it was given on my start
some are good, some are bad
like peering in the dark,
When I set out upon my future,
I could not count on my heart
but on the things of importance
that weren't just a lark,
When on my own I met the world
it wasn't pretty like in art
but rough and tough,
like scratching naked on some bark
So I worked to take my place,
trying to fill my own life cart
and to my surprise,
I wasn't leaving the slightest mark
-----------------------------------
Now I'm old,
looking back upon my start,
I realize that some choices
I did make in the dark,
I look ahead at my children
and pray deep within my heart
that their thinking isn't
that life is just a lark,
today I can appreciate
the beauty that's in art,
my tough exterior is but a farce,
truly, I am not as hard as bark,
I can now count on what I see
the things I've put inside my cart,
my wife, my children, and my life,
I have no riches, but I have left my mark.
— Eduardo Cruz, Jul 06, 2009
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Ink Dragon
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Eddie,
Eduardo Cruz
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Nina,