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Jul 06, 2009
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Gifts from the Birds
Thunderous applause
as two flocks come together
silhouetted, flickering black
against marshmallow sky
thousands of wings, whipping
smacking the air
precision chaos
dancing flight
weaving quickness
suddenly cresting
and falling
the waves of the evening
Just as I thank them
there's a loud splat!
on the picnic blanket
(their own 'thankyou'
just missing me)
and before the very eyes
which were gifted this sight
a single, solitary feather
winds and turns, pirouhetting
circling to land
with perfect delicacy
upon the same grass
I perch on
as two flocks come together
silhouetted, flickering black
against marshmallow sky
thousands of wings, whipping
smacking the air
precision chaos
dancing flight
weaving quickness
suddenly cresting
and falling
the waves of the evening
Just as I thank them
there's a loud splat!
on the picnic blanket
(their own 'thankyou'
just missing me)
and before the very eyes
which were gifted this sight
a single, solitary feather
winds and turns, pirouhetting
circling to land
with perfect delicacy
upon the same grass
I perch on
— faerybeki, Jul 06, 2009
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Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Beki,
faerybeki
17 years ago
Hi Nina, thanks for stopping
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Beki,
faerybeki
17 years ago
Nina, I think that’s a
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