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-Angel-Of-Night-

She floats
-Angel of Night-
to rose scented
petal concealment's
pressed and held
bowing to attention
shimmer

Dreamed to walk
eternal fields of night
unfurling its carpets
frost green glows to
tree sentinel's
branch epee
eve-ready

Alabaster hands
trail wheat-grass
to sweeping fingers
swooning at her touch
digressing
meeting a ground to rest

Expelling her might
Grey dusted wing-tips
brush nights face
misting
as moths glide
a glittered milky way
to the miraculous celestial

 

— Seren, Jul 06, 2009

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Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 11 months ago

This sounds awfully

like a Tree Fern growing in the silent evening mist. Ooh I love the line-A glittered milky way, so true!!! And so beautiful again. This mind of yours is full of amazement and wonderful words are coming forth. Your thoughts need to be bottled and sold at the highest price! I think I have become your greatest fan, forgive me! :)fleur (xxxxxoooo)
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Fleur

you know what I a have always said ? Its that,if only one person enjoys my poetry its all worth it ... your comment makes me blush and proud at the same time ... your a darlin woman and there is a few angels to come yet I have been writing a series for two months that was just the small first one ... And you just made all the hours I write worth it I cant thank you enough I think that might be one of the nicest compliments I have ever recieved ... Much Love Jayne (hugz) x x x x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

What a Beautiful Mind

You are in posession of! What I wouldn't give to have a tenth of your style and grace. Your way with words is a true gift. Reading this poem instantly eased my tensions. I love the lines Dreamed to walk eternal fields of night unfurling its carpets frost green glows to tree sentinel’s branch epee eve-ready and the ending reminds me of farie wings softly beating the night air in Spring! Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Cat you have it and more grace and style sweety....

You are one of my best judges and that you of all people liked this one I near cried when I read your comment thank you cant talk gotta get a tissue LOL and thats a real gusher LOL much love Jayne x x
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 11 months ago

Jayne, I’m so glad you

Jayne, I'm so glad you have such lovely company :) thank you for sharing her with us, much love Beki xx Ps not sure about the 's on concealment hon, but can't wotk out why it's wrong for me, sorry :) hugs B xx
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Beki ...

I found her here at Neopoet and she is one of the most awesome friends I have ever had the pleasure of getting to know .. this is just how i see her .. Take care huni (hug)Love Jayne x x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

Angel of the Night

Janye Beautiful so whistfull So dreamlike the land of my dreams I am the Angel of the night tonight. Drifting above the ground as I gently float by with my out streteched hands my long fingertips brush lightly the tops of whispering grasses. Like a gentle breeze cause and affect like waves in the sea. I was there, it was me. But there is no one there to see. I could leave the scent of Roses in my wake. I do shimmer and shine on gosamer wing do I take flight ever onwards through this night. Oh my friend a delightful flight Often I do travel and visit the place where my heart lies to see the face of my love and see his eyes sparkle and shine with a smile so divine Astral projection this may be this is my reality Take care my dear friend always maggie xx Electric Blue - Sorry comment turned into another poem. You do inspire me so.
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Maggie ....

Thats so beautiful huni ... I am honoured you are inspired by me its one of the greatest compliments I could receive I cant thank you enough (hugz) ... sorry to be slow answering everyone I am going back to bed hope your well ... much love Jayne x x