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Jul 06, 2009
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but give me something I can taste
make me lick the lollipop residue
that hasn't formed
force me to duck and cower
from the power in your words
caress me with your pen
and make me like it
invade my backbone
and melt me
to the chair
allow the release
and be the cause
give me something real
make me lick the lollipop residue
that hasn't formed
force me to duck and cower
from the power in your words
caress me with your pen
and make me like it
invade my backbone
and melt me
to the chair
allow the release
and be the cause
give me something real
— themoonman, Jul 06, 2009
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weirdelf
17 years ago
wow! Is it a full moon?
themoonman
17 years ago
Jess...
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Richard,
themoonman
17 years ago
Hi Nina...
Seren
17 years ago
I loved this Richard …
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17 years ago
Jayne...
Bert Lamrick
17 years ago
Well done, Richard
themoonman
17 years ago
Rick...
infinite_dwarf
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Richard
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17 years ago
Jess...
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17 years ago
Hi Richard
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Hi Leonard...
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(((((((Richard))))))))You
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Richard
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thank you Cat...
Kailashana
17 years ago
Richard, you inspired this
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17 years ago
Damn...
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17 years ago
Sign my cast
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17 years ago
Hi Janice...
bjp
17 years ago
Dear Richard,
themoonman
17 years ago
Cool...
orgami
17 years ago
"duck and cower"
themoonman
17 years ago
Hi Steven...
bloke
17 years ago
whilst melted to a chair..
themoonman
17 years ago
Hi Brent...
deelilah
17 years ago
Wow Richard
themoonman
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Dee...
themoonman
17 years ago
Hi Kelsey...
Geezer
16 years 11 months ago
Melt me....
Hooded Stranger
16 years 10 months ago
Simplicity
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Moonman
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