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one or the other

It is an icy dark drink in front of me,
froth sneering at me like a tortured pit-bull.
I stole this drink from a half empty bar,
full of boozers, problem drinkers,
me in ten years or so.
One man forced a smile and uttered,
“I won’t say a thing,” he said, “if you share it with me.”  
It’s an eerie blank drink in front of me,
generic, barely visible.
I found this drink at a crowded bar,
full of legends, important people,
me in ten years or so.
One man humbly announced,
“That should be my bottle,” he said, “but you can have it for me.”
— bloke, Jul 06, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

16 years 11 months ago

Bloke...

I really liked the two looks at the same situations, or almost the same... loved the way the first one ended. the second one, although the situation is much the same, but looked at totally different, the man at the end changed quite a bit... yes, liked this very much... Richard