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Jul 05, 2009
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Rico, for One Day
Music mixes
instant fixes,
avoiding, play with knives;
on the "go"
certainly, in the know,
ducking calls from one's ex-wives.
While on the street
destiny you'll meet,
so, please stand "bold", your ground;
let's not pretend
all must defend,
our streets, and all around.
Without a ride
no one can hide,
the drama that's understood;
only one claim
the "hood" has it's name,
defend it as you should.
And come what may
one must obey,
the rules that set things right;
children will play
only during the day,
protecting Home, can take all night.
What would you do
without a clue,
no option of getting to hide;
time to admit
if you have the "grit",
just "do", and never say, "I tried!"
We have our days
no time for praise,
considering our "plight";
times do depend
on a trusted friend,
as you endure each lonely night.
The "hood" makes a pack
keeping all on track,
with a code quite like no other;
don't act a fool
and keep things "cool",
you owe that to your Mother.
Time winds down
in this desperate town,
with rules all must obey;
as daylight sings
what sunrise brings,
never thought I'd feel this way.
I would never offend
a trusting friend,
but, I'd treat this lady, right;
life's not on lease
so I'll just say my peace,
really loud ! With all my might !
If I ever see
things change for me,
I'd gladly submit my "bid";
to hold the hand
of one lady, "grand",
my feelings would be not, "hid".
This beauty, rare
for whom I now care,
knows not, that I feel this way;
in a perfect world
and with life unfurled,
let me be Rico, for just one day.
instant fixes,
avoiding, play with knives;
on the "go"
certainly, in the know,
ducking calls from one's ex-wives.
While on the street
destiny you'll meet,
so, please stand "bold", your ground;
let's not pretend
all must defend,
our streets, and all around.
Without a ride
no one can hide,
the drama that's understood;
only one claim
the "hood" has it's name,
defend it as you should.
And come what may
one must obey,
the rules that set things right;
children will play
only during the day,
protecting Home, can take all night.
What would you do
without a clue,
no option of getting to hide;
time to admit
if you have the "grit",
just "do", and never say, "I tried!"
We have our days
no time for praise,
considering our "plight";
times do depend
on a trusted friend,
as you endure each lonely night.
The "hood" makes a pack
keeping all on track,
with a code quite like no other;
don't act a fool
and keep things "cool",
you owe that to your Mother.
Time winds down
in this desperate town,
with rules all must obey;
as daylight sings
what sunrise brings,
never thought I'd feel this way.
I would never offend
a trusting friend,
but, I'd treat this lady, right;
life's not on lease
so I'll just say my peace,
really loud ! With all my might !
If I ever see
things change for me,
I'd gladly submit my "bid";
to hold the hand
of one lady, "grand",
my feelings would be not, "hid".
This beauty, rare
for whom I now care,
knows not, that I feel this way;
in a perfect world
and with life unfurled,
let me be Rico, for just one day.
— docmaverick, Jul 05, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
methinks you over-use inverted commas here.
docmaverick
16 years 11 months ago
No, my friend....
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
I would definitely lose all those quotation marks
docmaverick
16 years 10 months ago
Ahhh....no more....
weirdelf
16 years 10 months ago
What are you talking about?