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kNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR - (picture this...)
KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR ....
The fullness of white, dimpled flesh
o'flows his steel-chinked armoured breast
Amor is nearest to her mind.
He is leaving
he has no time.
She leans naked straddled atop his horse
back arched exposed breasts
pressed hardened nipples on cold metal
He sits rigid -
grim and unimpressed
she hangs on adamant
rejected and distressed
With gropping gloved metallic hands
He grasps her flailing flesh-
between its deep recessive bands
he pushes her back
He makes her stand.
Untouchable, fully armoured and invincible is he
why not show a little chivalry?
The horse's head bends back,
neck crooked - as if to smile
He has been with this knight
for quite a while.
He knows of his conquests,
his prowess - his trials.
What a comical sight to behold
a damsel naked, swaying beyond her lilt
A man still in armour platted to the hilt
irascible implacable now somewhat unsteady
chivalry standying by
horse ever at the ready*...
BjR July 5, '09
* english expression which means: Prepared/ready to go
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