Lady Critza

She enters every room
with the quiet grace of a dancer.

But, she possesses a clean slate,
because she is void of expectations;

for she readily accepts Life's surprises,
so she boldly sips from it's cup.

When she tires of a room and exits
the air follows her right out the door,

leaving a void that can suffocate;
for hers is a beauty very rare.

Fortune smiled on me, this night...
for I was allowed to share footprints....with Lady Critza.

— docmaverick, Jul 04, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

Critiques

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

How beautiful cannot find

How beautiful cannot find any fault with it .... I can hear a ballad in music to this .... Great write relaxed me reading it .... Love Jayne x

docmaverick

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you, Jayne....

...I always listen to your comments, and I appreciate both, the comments and you. "Write On"! #{:>{)}@==== docmaverick.