Sweet Refrain

Inspired by Orgami' poem Weigh of lean

Oh my friend I do cherish the touch
of my last sweet refrain it haunts
me again and again.

It never leaves me, the memory lingers on
as waves in the sea it comes to me.
Your gentle voice sings it’s sweet
refrain over and over again.

Your touch as soft as satin as
light as a feather that brings
us back together.

We shiver and quiver in
the silent rain in the
passion of this
sweet refrain

The summer river deep and slow
runs forever, on we go
The essence of love
lingers in air

Your tender touch is always there
The sea of stars above our
heads as lost are we
in our nest.

Another amazing refrain from one
who knows how to make us
long for dreams and
more dreams

Dreams are all I have

Electric blue

— Electric Blue, Jul 04, 2009

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Country/Region: GBR

Critiques

Bonitaj

16 years 11 months ago

love's a many splendid thing

As is this poem! Loved it Good write Bonita j

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

Sweet Refrain

welcome my new friend Thank your for stopping by and reading my poem. I am terrible, as I read others poetry. When I try to comment. I am guilty of creating another poem. Electric Blue

Janice Pearce

16 years 11 months ago

Maggie

Sorry for butting in here Magie but there is nothing wrong with writing a poem with your comments~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

sweet Refrain

Jancie Thank you my friend but words tumble as i get inspired others here. It is out of my control I just have to do it. But it is good. Always Maggie

Electric Blue

16 years 10 months ago

Sweet Refrain

Janice How are my friend I hope your pain is getting less and that you can do more now. But do not rush listen to your body it is the best guide. I am glad my poem moved you. take care my friend maggie

orgami

16 years 11 months ago

blend

taking me time but here i am always intriquing the way artists find provocation to create from other works and finding this a great work of feeling and longing well written I read all cover jackets and as much about the poet artist film maker as I can wanting the intimate knowledge to better get a feel with background as opposed to anonymous peices But thats my personal want which I suscribe too for me there will always be those who stand out in the hallway of time the eyes the touch the voice that skips my heart on beating in its rythymn turning forty five today its not the big money i may have had in my hand but the special someone who had my attention at a table distant for coffee at dusk long gone those moments but at least I had them! yes at least i was there once and possibly yet again nicely done Maggie

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

Sweet Refrain

Org - Happy birthday - or maybe not? I too have a special someone but they choose otherwise but for me it can be no one else for all my eternity- always be. My heart cannot forget or wants too. As it has been filled to over flowing So all I have are my dreams and memeories but long the reality that once was. Well what can we do but create words to ease the pain in our hearts where once for a brief moment I too knew I have found true love no matter what happens this can never ever be taken away from me so i will recall and recall when my heart strings get pulled again by the invisible chord that joins us from afar Your line for me and for you seems to be Yes at last I was there once and possible yet again? Always Electric Blue so blue