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Jul 06, 2009
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Seventh of July
the seventh of July 2007
saw the darkness of daylight
rise out of the trenches
onto the pages of poetry heaven
almost like flying a kite
with sentence short and sweet
it took me a little while
to warm to this inner light
those little yellow stars
are a joy to receive
shows that I am here
and not living on mars
new friends are found
who show honesty not deceit
I question some critique
which we are always bound
having since come screaming in
to break the silence
from my blocked poetry mind
I'm not leaving here like Flynn
I offer phrase to open praise
of a life in word and rhyme
for this place has opened
my eyes to a big wide maze
saw the darkness of daylight
rise out of the trenches
onto the pages of poetry heaven
almost like flying a kite
with sentence short and sweet
it took me a little while
to warm to this inner light
those little yellow stars
are a joy to receive
shows that I am here
and not living on mars
new friends are found
who show honesty not deceit
I question some critique
which we are always bound
having since come screaming in
to break the silence
from my blocked poetry mind
I'm not leaving here like Flynn
I offer phrase to open praise
of a life in word and rhyme
for this place has opened
my eyes to a big wide maze
Comments
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Fleur your prolific at the
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
No wucking furries
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Congratulations….that you
Arrow
16 years 10 months ago
I enjoyed this uncluttered, frank poem.
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
The Darkness of Daylight
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Poetry heaven
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 1 month ago
I'm sure I will remember your birthday,
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
the air it would disintegrate like a forgotten myth.