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Jul 04, 2009
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LIFE IN A BAG
LIFE IN A BAG
The billions
Of peoples
Guarding
Their bags
Fill with
All , that they are
Dreams
The darkest
Secrets
All their hopes
And
All their wishes
This bag
Essential
When we loose
Our way
It carries
Validation
Personification
Lost ! when times
Change
It’s
Simply
Ones life
In one bag
A future
A past
Personified in
History
When times
Are good
When times
Are bad
The billions
Of peoples
Guarding
Their bags
Fill with
All , that they are
Dreams
The darkest
Secrets
All their hopes
And
All their wishes
This bag
Essential
When we loose
Our way
It carries
Validation
Personification
Lost ! when times
Change
It’s
Simply
Ones life
In one bag
A future
A past
Personified in
History
When times
Are good
When times
Are bad
— press, Jul 04, 2009
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weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
you describe situations,,