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Jul 03, 2009
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Rain
I got caught in the rain
browsing
dashed for shelter
all alone
sun still in the sky
soaked
left umbrella at home
rain stops
should of sung in the rain...
browsing
dashed for shelter
all alone
sun still in the sky
soaked
left umbrella at home
rain stops
should of sung in the rain...
— Fleur MacDonald, Jul 03, 2009
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Candlewitch
17 years ago
Rain
Fleur MacDonald
17 years ago
Thanks
Geezer
17 years ago
My opinion ......
Fleur MacDonald
17 years ago
Thanks Geezer
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
Just a drop of rain.
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