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Jul 02, 2009
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little wren
there's a little brown wren
that comes to my window
peers in
all day long
surprising me
with his curiosity
crooking his head
this way and that,
white Nimbus clouds
are crowding the baby blue
sky
on the other side of the window,
i can fly
"everything i am fleeing
is right here inside of me"*
* sentence from Nausher in his amazing video... the other side of the mirror...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mi8hjpnmBiw
that comes to my window
peers in
all day long
surprising me
with his curiosity
crooking his head
this way and that,
white Nimbus clouds
are crowding the baby blue
sky
on the other side of the window,
i can fly
"everything i am fleeing
is right here inside of me"*
* sentence from Nausher in his amazing video... the other side of the mirror...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mi8hjpnmBiw
— Kailashana, Jul 02, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
ah, we fly
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
i think i’ve seen those
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
yes, like that