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Jul 05, 2009
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Red Wine
my glass is just
half full
or is it half empty
I sip but not gulp
to saviour the taste
that pepper flavour
of berry fruit bouquet
room temperature is best
a cask a bottle a carafe
there is a little froth
if you pour to fast
much slower is best
vibrant in colour
deep crimson red
palate is generous
a hint of subtle oak
is this full bodied wine
with a lasting smooth finish
it's cold outside
and warm inside
with this lovely glass of red
half full
or is it half empty
I sip but not gulp
to saviour the taste
that pepper flavour
of berry fruit bouquet
room temperature is best
a cask a bottle a carafe
there is a little froth
if you pour to fast
much slower is best
vibrant in colour
deep crimson red
palate is generous
a hint of subtle oak
is this full bodied wine
with a lasting smooth finish
it's cold outside
and warm inside
with this lovely glass of red
Comments
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Wheres mine ? LOL I loved
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
I think you
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
there they are … big hug
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
and a big hug from me
jimmywaxhead
16 years 10 months ago
mmm ... wine is nice
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
I'm swishing it