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Red Wine

my glass is just
half full
or is it half empty
I sip but not gulp
to saviour the taste
that pepper flavour
of berry fruit bouquet
room temperature is best
a cask a bottle a carafe
there is a little froth
if you pour to fast
much slower is best
vibrant in colour
deep crimson red
palate is generous
a hint of subtle oak
is this full bodied wine
with a lasting smooth finish

it's cold outside
and warm inside
with this lovely glass of red

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Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Wheres mine ? LOL I loved

Wheres mine ? LOL I loved this one but before I vote did you meen saviour or savour ? just checking so I get the proper meening ... Love Jayne x
J

jimmywaxhead

16 years 10 months ago

mmm ... wine is nice

You write a delicious wine ... and you don't usually drink red ... I like this poem ... wine is my friend ... mmm ... wine ... jp xx
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 10 months ago

I'm swishing it

around in my mouth as I type, I do actually like a nice shiraz or merlot in the cooler months and maybe a bit of mull wine infront of a roaring fire!! thanks jimmy glad you liked it lolxx:)fleur